I need some #readerFeedback

Hey everybody,
I am studk in the middle of editing A Journey of Faith,and there is a scene that doesn’t work at the beginning of Chapter 7. Ok, as you know, Becca has witnessed something from her childhood that has traumatized her for the past 16 years. Not only that, but the Tensiltown police have been called to Sweet Water Park in Springville to investigate several attempts to sabotage the climbing paths.
Here’s where the trouble lies.at the beginning of Chapter 7, Angel, and her two children have been reunited with William after a few weeks. This is supposed to be a Christian suspense novel, so I was wondering if Becca should reunite this family she spends a coupld of days with along her way, or should something happen to the father to further test not only the small family’s faith, but that of my protagonist as well? Please forgive the lack of pictures, I am visually impaired, and I have some trouble finding pictures I can’t see.
Please let me know what you think, for although this is my novel, I want to know what my readers want to see happen in my story. Thanks for your feedback, and happy writing.
Blessings to you all,

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